"At first there was a sound like a roaring wind in her dreams. Then a tearing noise filled the air, the crackle of dry brush inflamed, and the smell of smoke swept over Tally bringing her suddenly and completely awake. Billowing clouds of smoke surround her, blotting out the sky. A ragged wall of flame moved through the flowers, giving off a wave of blistering heat."
It makes a clear picture of what's going on and the heat and the shrubs up in flame. It pictures what exactly is going on around Tally and you can just imagine how she would be feeling surrounded by the wall of flame.
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