"She threw herself backward against the elevator's side wall, standing on tiptoe and trying to flatten herself so they couldn't see her. More came up, huffing and puffing like typical out-of-shape pretties. Tally could watch them in the mirror at the back of the elevator." The author uses very descriptive language and show writing to show exactly what's happening.
is this your your blog pos #2 or #3
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